Case Notes 57.1 Janice Brown
Occupational English test – Writing (Nursing)
Instructions:
- You have 45 minutes to write this letter.
- During the first 5 minutes, you should not pick the pencil.
- Start writing only when you are told.
- During the Reading Time, try to understand the case notes.
Melons Steps
- Mark (M) PPRRAADDDDDWK.
- Eliminate (E) irrelevant information.
- Launch (L) the letter with DADR.
- Open (O) the letter with PRPDD or PRPTT.
- Narrate (N) the remaining paragraphs using V or W.
- Sign (S) the letter with S/F.
Melons Errors
- Punctuation “Marks”.
- Follow “Expansion” Rules.
- Obey “Language” Rules.
- Have an “Order” (DADR, PRPDD, V/W, S/F)
- Do not change “Names”.
- Sex (Mr, Ms, Mrs, His, Her).
Read the case notes below and complete the writing task which follows.
Notes:
Imagine that today is August 14, 2024. You are in charge of this patient at City Hospital, High Gate, Waterloo, UK.
Patient Details
- Name: Janice Brown.
- Age: 85
- Residence: Sunny Meadows Old Age Home (since husband’s death).
- Marital Status: Widowed (husband passed away 10 years ago)
Medical Background
- Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus (diagnosed 22 years ago).
- Osteoarthritis (diagnosed 10 years ago).
- Chronic Kidney Disease (Stage 3). Diagnosed 3 years ago.
- History of Stroke (2019).
- Allergy: Penicillin (rash, difficulty breathing).
- Father and mother had kidney disease.
Recent History
- Admitted with confusion and generalized weakness.
- Increased lethargy and decreased oral intake.
- New onset of shortness of breath.
- Uncontrolled blood sugar levels.
- Weight loss of 4 pounds in the past month.
Admission & Discharge
- Admission Date: 10 August 2024.
- Discharge Date: 15 August 2024
- Diagnosis: Exacerbation of Chronic Kidney Disease, Uncontrolled Diabetes Mellitus.
ED Record
- Vitals on Admission: Temp 37.8°C, HR 105 bpm, RR 20, BP 160/95 mmHg, O2 Sat 89% on room air.
- Labs: Elevated creatinine 2.5 mg/dL, Blood glucose 320 mg/dL, HbA1c 9.5%.
- Treatment in ED: IV fluids, insulin therapy, oxygen therapy.
Nursing Care
- Daily monitoring of vital signs and blood glucose levels.
- Assistance with activities of daily living (ADLs).
- Encouraging fluid intake and balanced diet.
- Frequent repositioning to prevent pressure ulcers.
- Physical therapy to improve mobility.
- Patient education on diabetes management.
Discharge Medications
- Metformin 500 mg twice daily.
- Lisinopril 20 mg daily.
- Glipizide 5 mg daily.
- Aspirin 81 mg daily.
- Multivitamin daily
- Calcium with Vitamin D supplement daily
Discharge Plan
- Follow-up appointment with GP Dr. Michael Spencer in 1 week.
- Regular blood glucose monitoring.
- Repeat kidney function tests in 1 week.
- Continue daily vital signs and assessments.
- Monitor for signs of hyperglycemia or hypoglycemia.
- Ensure proper hydration and diet management.
- Equipment Required: Walker, Blood glucose monitor, Nebulizer
Writing Task
Using the information in the case notes, write a letter to Ms. Richa Howard, head nurse at Sunny Meadows Old Age Home, 456 Meadow Lane, Norwich, where the patient will return after discharge, tomorrow.
In your answer:
- Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences.
- Do not use note form.
- Use letter format.
The body of the letter should be approximately 180–200 words.
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