Case Notes 49.1 Mrs. Lisa Anderson (Nursing)
Occupational English Test – Writing (Nursing)
Instructions:
- You have 45 minutes to write this letter.
- During the first 5 minutes, you should not pick the pencil.
- Start writing only when you are told.
- During the Reading Time, try to understand the case notes.
Melons Steps
- Mark (M) PPRRAADDDDDWK.
- Eliminate (E) irrelevant information.
- Launch (L) the letter with DADR.
- Open (O) the letter with PRPDD or PRPTT.
- Narrate (N) the remaining paragraphs using V or W.
- Sign (S) the letter with S/F.
Melons Errors
- Punctuation “Marks”.
- Follow “Expansion” Rules.
- Obey “Language” Rules.
- Have an “Order” (DADR, PRPDD, V/W, S/F)
- Do not change “Names”.
- Sex (Mr, Ms, Mrs, His, Her).
Details to Fill In:
- CANDIDATE NAME. ROLE NUMBER.
- DATE OF BIRTH. VENUE OF THE TEST. TEST DATE.
Read the case notes below and complete the writing task which follows.
Notes:
You are Emily Ryan, Charge Nurse in the Emergency Department, Hills Hospital, Melbourne.
Today’s date: 25 July, 2024
- Patient Details: Name: Mrs. Lisa Anderson.
- Age: 34 years.
- Address: 1212 River Side, 12th Avenue, Melbourne.
Presenting Complaints:
- Severe fatigue. Shortness of breath. Swelling in legs and feet.
- Persistent cough. Palpitations.
- Diagnosis: Heart failure (exacerbated post-delivery).
- Persisting Postpartum depression.
History:
- Pregnancy and Delivery: G2-P2-L2. Delivered her second child three months ago via emergency C-section due to fetal distress.
- Hypertension: Since 2020.
- Gestational diabetes (during both pregnancies).
- History of pre-eclampsia in first pregnancy.
07 July, 2024
- Visited GP at Hills Hospital.
- Diagnosed with postpartum depression.
- Prescribed sertraline 50 mg daily.
- Review on 24th July, 2024.
25 July, 2024 (11.30 AM)
- Re-admitted to Hills Hospital with symptoms of heart failure.
- Echocardiogram showed reduced ejection fraction (30%).
- Commenced diuretics, ACE inhibitors, and beta-blockers.
Family History:
- Mother has hypertension and type 2 diabetes.
- Father died of myocardial infarction at 60 years old.
Social History:
- Lives alone with her two children.
- Husband deceased (died in a car accident a year ago).
- No close family support.
- Unemployed, financial difficulties.
- Non-smoker, occasional alcohol use.
Medications:
- Furosemide 40mg daily. Lisinopril 10mg daily.
- Metoprolol 25mg twice daily. Sertraline 50mg daily
Physical Examination:
- BP: 150/90 mmHg. HR: 110 bpm. RR: 22 breaths/min. SpO2: 94% on room air.
- Weight: 80 kg. Height: 165 cm. BMI: 29.4
Investigations:
- Blood tests: Elevated BNP levels, mild anemia (Hb: 10 g/dL).
- Chest X-ray: Pulmonary congestion.
- Echocardiogram: Reduced ejection fraction (30%).
03.00 PM (Today)
- Discussed transfer to Green Valley Hospital.
- Dr Lao S’Orvel agrees to see the patient tomorrow, 10.00 AM.
Plan:
- Urgent referral to cardiologist for further management of heart failure.
- Referral to social services for support.
- Ongoing psychiatric support for postpartum depression.
Writing Task:
Using the information in the case notes, write a referral letter to Dr. Lao S’Orvel, Consultant Cardiologist, Green Valley Cardiology Hospital, Melbourne, requesting an urgent consultation for further assessment and management.
In your answer:
- Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences.
- Do not use note form.
- Use letter format.
The body of the letter should be approximately 180–200 words.
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