Occupational English Test – Writing (Nursing)
Instructions:
- You have 45 minutes to write this letter.
- During the first 5 minutes, you should not pick the pencil.
- Start writing only when you are told.
- During the Reading Time, try to understand the case notes.
Melons Steps
- Mark (M) PPRRAADDDDDWK.
- Eliminate (E) irrelevant information.
- Launch (L) the letter with DADR.
- Open (O) the letter with PRPDD or PRPTT.
- Narrate (N) the remaining paragraphs using V or W.
- Sign (S) the letter with S/F.
Melons Errors
- Punctuation “Marks”.
- Follow “Expansion” Rules.
- Obey “Language” Rules.
- Have an “Order” (DADR, PRPDD, V/W, S/F)
- Do not change “Names”.
- Sex (Mr, Ms, Mrs, His, Her).
Details to Fill In:
- CANDIDATE NAME. ROLE NUMBER.
- DATE OF BIRTH. VENUE OF THE TEST. TEST DATE.
Read the case notes below and complete the writing task which follows.
Notes:
Today is July 11, 2024 and you are taking care of this patient at Hilltop Hospital, Booth. The patient will be discharged tomorrow.
Patient Details:
- Name: (Colonel) Fisher Mann.
- Age: 55 years.
- Nationality: American.
- Address: Currently posted in Booth, Canberra, ACT.
- Admission Date: 9 July 2024.
- Discharge Date: 13 July 2024.
Social Background:
- Military Officer, posted for a three-month assignment in Booth, Canberra, ACT.
- Lives alone in temporary military accommodation. Has a cook (Mr Arnold Rich) staying with him.
- Two dogs and an eagle.
- No family members in Australia.
- Has a wife and two adult sons in Philadelphia, US.
Medical History:
- Hypertension (diagnosed in 2015), managed with Lisinopril 10 mg daily
- Very active. Does rigorous exercise. Hits a local Gym. Takes protein supplements in high amounts.
- Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus (diagnosed in 2018), managed with Metformin 500 mg twice daily
- No known allergies.
- Non-smoker, occasional alcohol consumption
9 July 2024:
- Admitted to Hilltop Hospital following a car accident.
- Diagnosed with multiple bruises, minor lacerations, and a fractured right leg.
- Underwent surgery to set the fractured leg on 10 July 2024.
- Post-operative recovery, currently stable.
Present Condition:
- Recovering from surgery. Stability expected in a week.
- Pain management with Paracetamol 500 mg every 6 hours as needed.
- Antibiotics: Cefalexin 500 mg every 8 hours to prevent infection.
- Blood pressure and blood glucose levels are stable with current medications.
- Wounds take longer to heal due to overstraining with dogs (reports Mr Rich).
- Bled last night while restraining the bigger dog Ape.
Discharge Plan:
- Bed rest 1 month (ensure ↑ healing.
- Follow-up appointment 19 July (wound check, suture removal).
- Referral physiotherapy (after one month); aid needed with mobility, recovery).
- Paracetamol 500 mg every 6 hours PRN (pain).
- Continue Cefalexin 500 mg every 8 hours for 7 more days
- HTN, and DM, continue, PRN.
- Discuss referral to occupational therapy with family.
- Monitor BP and blood glucose levels (everyday).
- Contact Hilltop Hospital immediately if there are signs of infection (redness, swelling, or increased pain), or if blood pressure/blood glucose levels are unstable).
Writing Task:
Write a letter to Community Nurse Ms. Margaret Woods, community health centre, requesting home care and monitoring for Colonel Fisher Mann for the next month to assist with his recovery and ensure proper management of his conditions. Address the letter to Booth Community Health Centre, Green Park, Canberra, ACT
In your answer:
- Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences
- Do not use note form
- Use letter format
The body of the letter should be APPROXIMATELY 180-200 words.
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Question of
Is this a known case (K)?
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Yes
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No
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Question of
Who is the recipient (R1)?
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Doctor.
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Community Nurse.
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Social Worker.
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Question of
What is the purpose (P2)?
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Further assessment.
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Continued care at home.
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Continued care at a facility.
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Initiate postoperative care.
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What is the present condition (P3?)
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No progress.
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Diagnosed.
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Being treated and recuperated.
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Recuperating post surgery.
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Question of
Which of the plans is not relevant?
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Bed rest 1 month (ensure ↑ healing.
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Follow-up appointment 19 July (wound check, suture removal).
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Referral physiotherapy (after one month);
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Aid needed with mobility, recovery).
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Paracetamol 500 mg every 6 hours PRN (pain).
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Discuss referral to occupational therapy with family.
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Continue Cefalexin 500 mg every 8 hours for 7 more days HTN, and DM, continue, PRN.
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Monitor BP and blood glucose levels (everyday).
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Contact Hilltop Hospital immediately if there are signs of infection (redness, swelling, or increased pain), or if blood pressure/blood glucose levels are unstable).
Correct Wrong
"Discuss referral to occupational therapy with family" is the only plan that is not required to be mentioned in this letter. This is not something the Community Nurse has to do. It is the writer's duty. If this is not clear, attend our 10.30 AM sessions.
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Question of
What is correct?
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Please note, he has a follow up appointment on 19th June for wound check and suture removal along with he has a referral with physiotherapy.
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Please note, he has a follow up appointment on 19th June for wound checking and suture removal along with a referral with physiotherapy.
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Please note that, he has a follow up appointment on 19th June for wound checking and suture removal along with a referral with a physiotherapist.
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Please note, he has a follow up appointment on 19th June for wound checking and suture removal along with a referral to a physiotherapist.
Correct Wrong
Do not use a verb after "along with." Do not use comma after "that" in "Please note."
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Question of
Colonel Fisher Mann ___________ a history of hospitalization due to hypertension diagnosed in 2015.
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has had
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had
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has
Correct Wrong
We never use "has had" with history. Has had is used with a chronic condition. "She has had diabetes mellitus since 2020."
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Question of
He ____________________.
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consumes alcohol, occasionally.
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consumes occasionally alcohol.
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occasionally, consumes alcohol.
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Question of
He is recuperating _____________ a surgery to correct a fracture.
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from
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after
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Question of
He is being _____________ today.
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discharge
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discharged
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discharging
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Question of
Colonel Mann was admitted to our facility _____________ a car accident.
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following
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followed
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followed by
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Question of
He underwent the surgery ________________.
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ysterday
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on yesterday
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Question of
Cefalexin, 500 mg, _______________ is administered.
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8 hours
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8 hourly
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8th hourly
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