OET Writing

OET Writing – Opening Paragraph

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Follow one of the 5 PRP.PD styles for the opening / intro paragraph.

Eleanor Richards

  • Patient: Mrs. Eleanor Richards; Age: 68 years
  • Recipient: Nurse Sarah Bennett, Star Aged Care Home.
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Hip fracture surgery.
  • Current Condition: Recovering well, using a walker, requires assistance with daily activities.
  • Discharge Destination: Star Aged care home.
  • Discharge date: Today.
  • Purpose: Continued assistance with mobility, wound care, and medication management.

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Mrs Eleanor Richards requires continued assistance with mobility, assistance with daily activities, wound care, and medication management. She is recovering well and is being discharged today.

Patient: Mr. Daniel Cooper

  • Patient: Mr. Daniel Cooper; Age: 55 years
  • Recipient: Nurse Olivia Johnson, Home Health Care Team.
  • Discharge Date: Tomorrow (February 1, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Appendectomy
  • Current Condition: Stable, mild postoperative discomfort, tolerating diet well.
  • Discharge Destination: Patient’s own home.
  • Purpose: Wound care and pain management at home.

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Mr. Daniel Cooper requires wound care and pain management at home. He is recuperating after appendectomy with mild discomfort and is being discharged tomorrow.

Mr. Henry Wilson

  • Patient Name: Mr. Henry Wilson; Age: 78 years
  • Recipient: Nurse Laura Adams, Hillside Aged Care Home Facility
  • Discharge Date: Tomorrow (February 1, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Stroke rehabilitation
  • Current Condition: Improved but requires assistance with speech and mobility
  • Discharge Destination: Hillside Aged care home (The patient is being transferred to an aged care facility for the first time).
  • Purpose of the Letter: Continued rehabilitation, speech therapy, and mobility support.
  • Follow-up Requirements: Regular physiotherapy and speech therapy sessions.

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Mr. Henry Wilson requires continued rehabilitation including speech therapy and mobility support. He is recuperating from a stroke rehabilitation and will be discharged tomorrow.

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George Martin 

Patient: Mr. George Martin; 61 years
Address: 44 Beach Road, Darwin, NT 0800

  • Recipient: Nurse Rebecca Foster, Residential Rehabilitation Center
  • Discharge Date: Tomorrow (February 1, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Heart bypass surgery
  • Current Condition: Stable, requires cardiac rehabilitation and lifestyle modifications
  • Discharge Destination: Rehabilitation facility
  • Purpose of the Letter: Post-surgical cardiac rehabilitation and lifestyle monitoring
  • Follow-up Requirements: Physiotherapy, dietary adjustments, and medication management.

Mr George Martin requires ………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………… ………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………. ……………………………… .

Ms Rachel Carter

Patient Name: Ms. Rachel Carter; 36 years
Address: 19 Elm Street, Canberra, ACT 2600

  • Recipient: Nurse James Edwards, Community Health Nursing Team
  • Discharge Date: Today (January 31, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Cesarean section delivery
  • Current Condition: Stable, mild post-surgical pain, baby is healthy
  • Discharge Destination: Patient’s own home
  • Purpose of the Letter: Postnatal care and wound healing support
  • Follow-up Requirements: Monitoring for infection, pain management, and breastfeeding support.

Ms Rachel Carter requires ………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………… ………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………. ……………………………… .

Mr. William Parker

  • Patient Name: Mr. William Parker
  • Age: 50 years
  • Address: 90 Central Road, Gold Coast, QLD 4217
  • Recipient: Nurse Sophie Daniels, Home Health Services
  • Discharge Date: Tomorrow (February 1, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Hernia repair surgery
  • Current Condition: Stable, advised to avoid heavy lifting, minor pain present
  • Discharge Destination: Patient’s own home.
  • Purpose of the Letter: Wound care and post-surgical mobility guidance.
  • Follow-up Requirements: Pain management, activity restrictions, and diet modifications.

Mr William Parker ………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………… ………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………. ……………………………… .

Mr. Thomas Bennett

  • Patient Name: Mr. Thomas Bennett
  • Age: 74 years
  • Address: 77 Riverbank Drive, Newcastle, NSW 2300
  • Recipient: Nurse Emma Collins, Assisted Living Facility
  • Discharge Date: Today (January 31, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Hip replacement surgery
  • Current Condition: Recovering well, requires physiotherapy and assistance with walking
  • Discharge Destination: Assisted living facility
  • Purpose of the Letter: Physiotherapy and post-operative mobility care
  • Follow-up Requirements: Pain management, physiotherapy sessions, and fall prevention

Mr Thomas Bennett requires ………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………… ………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………. ……………………………… .

Ms Linda Scott

  • Patient Name: Ms. Linda Scott (47 years)
  • Address: 10 Oak Avenue, Perth, WA 6000
  • Recipient: (Nurse) Jacob Miller, Community Nursing Services.
  • Discharge Date: Today (January 31, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Gallbladder removal surgery.
  • Current Condition: Stable, mild pain, requires dietary adjustments.
  • Discharge Destination: Patient’s own home
  • Purpose of the Letter: Dietary monitoring and post-operative care.
  • Follow-up Requirements: Pain management, wound care, and gradual dietary transition.

Ms Linda Scott ………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………… ………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………. ……………………………… .

Mrs. Susan Hall

  • Patient Name: Mrs. Susan Hall
  • Age: 69 years
  • Address: 27 Sunset Boulevard, Townsville, QLD 4810
  • Recipient: Nurse Daniel Roberts, Home Nursing Care
  • Discharge Date: Tomorrow (February 1, 2025)
  • Reason for Hospitalization: Diabetes-related foot ulcer treatment
  • Current Condition: Healing well, needs continuous wound care and blood sugar monitoring
  • Discharge Destination: Patient’s own home
  • Purpose of the Letter: Wound care and blood sugar monitoring at home
  • Follow-up Requirements: Regular dressing changes, dietary management, and glycemic control monitoring.

Mrs Susan Hall requires ………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………… ………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………. ……………………………… .

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