Below are some common errors you commit in OET Writing. Learn them carefully.
Articles
A, an and the are articles. A and an are used for indicating a singular noun which is mentioned in the letter for the first time. However, "the" is used to refer to something that is already mentioned.
A / An
- An automobile engineer, Mr Parker lives with a friend.
The
- The friend that Mr Parker lived with is shifting to another house.
The is also used before body parts:
- Error: She had pain in abdomen.
- Correct: She had pain in the abdomen.
- Reason: Use "the" before body parts.
An / A?
Examples for “an”
- An MRI (em-aar-ai)
- An admission (ad…)
- An outpatient admission (aut…)
- An eight-year-old child
- An eighty-year-old…
- ____ one-eyed patient.
Examples for “a”
- A university (yoo-ni) student…
- A one-pound (van- pound) reduction
- A one-eyed man…
- A youth festival …
Important: It is not AEIOU, but the first sound of the word!
The + “Anything already mentioned”
- When you mention something for the first time in the letter, like, “pain in the chest,” do not write “the” before it.
- However, do not miss “the” when you refer to the same chest pain the second, third, fourth, fifth times.
- First Time: She was brought to the clinic with chest pain. (No “the”)
- After the First Time: “It was found that the pain was radiating to the right side. (“the pain” refers to the chest pain mentioned before)
The + Body Parts
- Do not miss the article “the” before all body parts – internal or external.
- However, if it is a disease condition like “hip-fracture”, we do not write “the” before hip fracture. You can write, fracture of the hip.
Examples
- He is not able to lift the left hand.
- She cut the right ear lobe in an accident.
- An immediate extraction of the tooth is advised.
- At the end, two of the extremities were amputated.
Nouns
There are a large number of nouns we have to be careful with:
History
- Error: She had a history of Appendectomy.
- Correct: She has a history of appendectomy.
- Reason: History is always present; only the event can be in the past.
Nouns vs Adjectives
Adjective vs Nouns
- Error: He has allergic for penicillin.
- Correct: He is allergic to penicillin.
- Reason: Use is before an adjective form.
- Other forms: He has allergy to penicillin.
Words to Avoid
There are some words we shouldn't use in OET letters. Here are some of the:
Patient
- Error: The patient is not suffering from any other condition.
- Correct: Mr Parker does not have any other condition.
- Reason: We cannot use words like "suffer", "patient", etc.
- Other words to avoid: Obese, greatly, overweight.
Suffer
- Error: Mr Parker is suffering from diabetes.
- Correct: Mr Parker has had diabetes.
- Reason: We avoid "suffer" and its forms.
Also avoid:
- Obese / overweight.
- Unfortunately.
- Regretfully.
Connectors
And / But / However / Also
- We use “but” if the information on its both sides are opposite:
Examples
- She was admitted on 22nd March and was diagnosed with…
- Her dietitian made her shift to a Mediterranean diet plan; however, she did not show any progress.
- Although her dietitian had made her shift to a Mediterranean diet plan, she did not show any progress.
Additionally (In addition to this)
Use “additionally” to begin a sentence only if the previous sentence has a similar information
- Ms Renuka recommended homeopathy for her colleagues. Additionally, one day, she introduced them to Dr Siva, a homeopath.
Look at these two sentences:
- She has been able to tolerate light meals at present… (progress).
- In addition to this, she can walk short distances… (progress).
You can see that the first sentence is about a patient’s progress. What about the second sentence? That is progress, too!
Also / In addition to this, +
You cannot use “Also” to start a new sentence. However, it is a good practice to start a sentence with “In addition to this, …”
- Incorrect: Also, his haemoglobin level has dropped to 71.
- Correct: In addition to this, his haemoglobin level has dropped to 71.
And / along with / As well as …
- “And” and “along with” are not the same. They are slightly different!
- And is used to connect A and B (two pieces of information of the same type).
- Along with is used to connect A and 2 (two information of the same category but slightly different).
- Medication and diet change are part of management (same) but they are slightly different.
Examples
- She was thereafter treated with metformin and amoxicillin.
- She requires medication along with a meal programme.
- She was managed thereafter with medication along with diet change.
For which / for this
- “For which” is used to connect two parts of a sentence. However, “For this” is used to start a new sentence.
- Important – Do not use a comma before or after for which.
- Do not miss the comma (,) after “For this,”
Examples
- She exhibited symptoms of myocardial infarction at 11 pm for which she was transferred to …
- She exhibited symptoms of myocardial infarction after the evening meal. For this, she was transferred to ….
Though / Although / even though: However,
- These two have almost the same meaning.
- If the first part of the sentence is over 20 words, you can full-stop and start the next sentence with However:
Examples
- Currently, he ambulates short distances with the help of a wheelie walker; however, he needs assistance with activities of daily living.
- Although he currently ambulates short distances with the help of a wheelie walker, he needs assistance with activities of daily living.
- Currently he ambulates short distances with the help of a wheelie walker for long distances, or a stick, for shorter distances. However, he needs assistance with activities of daily living.
Unless (If + not)
- Please do not take this medicine unless indicated.
- You can’t pass this exam unless you work hard.
- I will not admit Ms Lee unless (if + not) she is in critical condition.
Please note / Please note,
You can use “please note” followed by a comma or a “that” as a connective when the current sentence is not well connected to the previous sentence. Suppose the previous sentence is about the discharge medication but the current sentence is about a drug allergy.
- Mr Pious has recently recovered from an acute episode of coronary artery disease. Please note that he consumes alcohol in excess.
NB: Do not use a comma and “that” together. You need only one of them:
- Incorrect: Please note that, he consumes alcohol in excess.
- Correct: Please note, he consumes alcohol in excess.
- Correct: Please note that he consumes alcohol in excess.
Connectors to Avoid
Banned Connectors: So, besides, further more, moreover. Instead, you can use the following connectors:
What connectors should I avoid?
- Furthermore
- Moreover,
- Besides,
- Meanwhile,
- Apart from that,
- Later on,
- Hence,
- So,
- Thus,
- Thereafter
- So
Don'ts
- So, Mr Parker underwent surgery on the same day.
- Besides, he was advised to take a break from his job.
- Moreover, she was shifted to the ward on the same day.
Dos.
- Therefore, Mr Parker underwent surgery on the same day.
- Additionally, he was advised to take a break from his job.
- In addition to this, she was shifted to the ward on the same day.
Prepositions
Here is a list of a few prepositions that should be carefully used.
On
- Error: She is undergoing for surgery.
- Correct: She is undergoing surgery.
- Reason: No need for "for."
By or With
- Error: He was treated with a physiotherapist.
- Correct: He was treated by a physiotherapist.
- Reason: By is used before people; with is used before things.
- Examples: Treated by a doctor. Treated with antacids.
Since vs For
- Error: She is a diabetic since 10 years.
- Correct: She has been a diabetic for 10 years.
- Reason: Use "for" with durations.
Of / About
- Error: He was complaining about headache.
- Correct: He was complaining of a headache.
- Reason: Use "of" with complaints.
For
- Error: He was advised for surgery.
- Correct: She was advised to undergo surgery.
- Reason: Use "to + undergo" for advice.
On
- Error: M Reeta was admitted on yesterday.
- Correct: Ms Reeta was admitted yesterday.
- Reason: We do not use "on" with "today, yesterday, tomorrow."
- Similar Errors: On today. On tomorrow.
On assessment / Admission + Past medical condition
Rules:
- Always use past tense after “on assessment” and “upon admission.”
- Do not forget the comma (,) before the patient’s name.
Examples:
- On admission, Ms Reeta had high blood pressure and symptoms of myocardial infarction.
Following / Followed by
The more you think of “following” and “followed by,” your confusion increases. So, before you cannot deal with it, “he was admitted following a fall” means fall happened first.
- Incorrect: Mrs Price was admitted 2 days ago with mild concussion followed by a fall.
- Correct: Mrs Price was admitted 2 days ago with mild concussion following a fall.
- The first is incorrect because fall happened first! Following a fall = Fall happened first!
Verb and Tense
Be careful with verbs and tenses.
Undergo, Underwent, Undergone
- Error: She was undergone an MRI.
- Correct: She underwent an MRI.
- Reason: "Undergone" is used with "has, have or had."
Completed / Incomplete Actions
If an action started but not yet completed, use "have" or "has" forms. For completed actions, use simple past (was, did).
Incomplete Actions
- She has commenced medication.
- He has been advised not to lift heavy weights.
Completed Actions
- She commenced medication.
- He was advised not to lift heavy weights.
Correct Words
Refused vs Denied
- Error: Mr Parker refused any history of hypertension.
- Correct: The patient denied any history of hypertension.
- Reason: Refuse and deny are not the same.
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