Occupational English Test – Writing (Nursing)
- Read the case notes below and complete the writing task which follows.
Notes:
Assume that today’s date is 6 March, 2024. You are Miss Fiona Carwell’s School Health Nurse and the patient is attending 6th grade at your school.
Patient Details:
- Name: Fiona Carwell.
- DOB: 06 Dec 2011 (12 y.o.)
- Address: 32 Station Road, Oakville
Social background:
- She’s from a migrant family from Spain relocated to Oakville, 1999.
- Father’s demise, June 2023, (MVA).
- Family reports grief. Pt reports extreme stress re. worries about the future in the absence of father who was really close with her.
- BMI 29 (recently gained weight due to poor diet control).
- Older brother-mental health problems (2 suicide attempts in last 12 months).
Medical History
08 July, 2023, 0915 hrs
- Feeling very thirsty.
- Passing urine more often than usual, particularly at night.
- Feeling very tired all the time; Weight loss of 6 kg in 2 months.
- Frequent oral thrush. Blurred vision.
- Emergency hospital admission (Oakville General Hospital) following an episode of LOC.
- Lab Investigations: Random Blood Sugar of 11.9 mmol/L. HbA1C high.
- Diagnosis: type 1 DM. Treatment: Novolin N 4 Unit at tarde; Solostar 8 unit at nocte.
- Discharge Date: 15 July, 2023.
Discharge Recommendations:
- Dietician referral.
- Lifestyle management.
- Diabetes Nurse Specialist referral at Oakville General Hospital for follow up care (diet, insulin).
- Review at DNS.
11 August, 2023
- Well maintained Blood Sugar.
- Following healthy lifestyle along with proper nutrition (well-balanced calorie diet). RBS 4.6. Reduced Solostar to 6 unit due to several hypo attacks at night.
18 December, 2023
- Blurred vision. Increased power.
- S/B ophthalmologist.
- Started to wear spectacles.
- Reduced symptoms.
- No headache or Blurred vision (thereafter).
6 March, 2024
- Dizziness and light-headedness, sleepy during class.
- Pt reports stress due to grief.
- Pt reports stress induced overeating
- Management: RBS 16.8, urine ketones high. Blood ketones 0.9
Plan:
- Referral to Diabetes Nurse Specialist.
- Review of meds.
- Discuss ways to encourage lifestyle changes.
- Plan further management.
Writing Task
Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter of referral to Ms Catherine Flanagan, Diabetes Nurse Specialist, Oakville General Hospital. In your letter, briefly outline Ms Carwell’s recent history requesting advice and a review of her medication.
In your answer:
- Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences.
- Do not use note form.
- Use letter format.