Start with Profession
- “A retired professor of Economics, Mr John lives in rented house with a servant….”
- An artist as well as online seller, Ms Lee lives with husband and 3 adult sons
- An artist and an online seller, Ms Lee lives with husband and her 3 adult sons. (Need to change the order)
Start with Family Role
- Mother of three school-going children, Ms Tara works as a store manager.
- It is good that you use being somewhere in the letter, to start a sentence.
- It is a good alternative for “as” which you are not allowed to use in letters.
- Being unemployed, Ms Taylor depends on disability allowance for schizophrenia.